Write a letter to accommodation officer regarding roommate behaviour.

#accommodation #officer #roommate #behaviour

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have a concern regarding my new

roommate

. I stay in

room

number 102 in Block C. My new

roommate

always plays loud music

especially

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during the nighttime. I didn't have any issues with my previous

roommate

. She was

very

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silent woman and never used to disturb me.

However

, I am finding it very

difficulty

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having

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proper communication. From

the

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day one, we haven't spoken to each other properly. She is really very rude and verbally abusive many a time. I tried to resolve

this

issue by myself, hoping everything would be fine but wasn't successful enough. Is there a possibility of changing her

room

or you can provide me with

different

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room

where the

roommate

is decent and not much talkative

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I will be very glad if you provide me with

single

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room

. I am ready to pay any extra payment for single accommodation. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Saraswati

Submitted by saraswatidivakar on Wed Oct 13 2021

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