Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In recent days, most of the populace opts to be an entrepreneur

instead

of being employed in a conglomerate.

This

is because they want to prove their talent in a creative manner rather than doing a monotonous job. The main demerit of being a businessman is not having the profit or amount throughout the year.

To begin

with, people not choosing the option to work in a company are to avoid the repetition of their tasks.

That is

to say that while doing their own

business

they have the freedom to decide and introduce new technology or ideas to develop their organisation.

In addition

, it helps them to understand the task from the scratch and aids them to overcome all the obstacles to become a successful

person

in their career.

For example

, my friend has started her own boutique

business

and she was awarded as "Best Enterpreneur" because of her uniqueness in her materials that attracted the customers.

This

example proves that self-owned work will enhance a

person

's creative thinking and the way for them to achieve their ambitions.

On the other hand

, the main drawback in self-employment is that it cannot be assured that we will get the best turnover all over the year.

In other words

, there might be a chance for the

business

to go down and because of that people might suffer to lead their basic

life

Also

, that might make them to buy more loans and be in debt for a long time.

For instance

, in India, a

person

who owns their grocery shop cannot expect the sale or profit everyday but they have to maintain the stock to run the

business

which might indulge them to get the amount from banks and run their stores.

Therefore

, unlike the employee in a company who get regular salary, people doing their own job will not get the same and that might end up in under-privileged lifestyle. In conclusion,

although

working in their own shop as a

business

person

will help them to think in a different way to become a successful entrepreneur and succeed in their

life

and career, it might

also

cause some disadvantage in their

life

by not getting enough amount from their work and that cause them to lead a debt

life

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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