Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit but others think there are more important issues that need attention before roads can be safe. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over speed is one of the greatest cause of accidents, but there are several causes are
also
responsible for the occurring of
such
accidents. Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on
city
streets and roads is to lower the speed limit, but
this
could not only rectify the problem. People must have to be aware during riding,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
on
city
streets because
firstly
city
streets
seems
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seem
to be more
conjusted
overfull as with blood
congested
than
city
roads and
secondly
, more street activities performed
by
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in
public. According to my
opine
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opinion
, in order to improve the safety on
city
streets, speed breakers at regular intervals should be provided and
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
at more happening places. There should be proper setbacks on
streets
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the streets
, no coverage or built up area should be towards roads, streets should be smooth, without any patches and every rider must have to wear helmets for their own safety. Because in India, majorly people died due to road accidents. Straight roads should be more preferable, at junctions of streets speed limit should be minimized, children should not play on
city
streets, and most of the above people must not have to
allowed
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allow
their
children for vehicles
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vehicles for children
before the age of 18. In the night, there should be street lights on
city
streets along with CCTV's cameras. Vehicles should be properly parked because road parking is
also
a major cause of accidents. Due to increasing rates of accidents on roads and streets,
govt
.
now
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Now
has made strict rules and increased the Callahan's price manifolds. Before the amendments of these regulations, people seems to drive recklessly and
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
the drunken one's. But now due to high Callahan's people have become more attentive, caring and protective. According to my
opine
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opinion
, heavy loaded vehicles should be banned on
city
streets, speed limit of vehicles on
city
streets should be fixed, and vehicles should be allowed by parents only after a good training. By implementation of
such
ideas, probability of street accidents could be minimized.
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