Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Buying online advantages and disadvantages Buying online becomes one of recent
technology result
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technology, result
technology results
technology results results
and a habit of most of 21th century people. There are many advantages and disadvantages of buying online. Fortunately, buying online is an aspect of
recent century
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the recent century
recent centuries
and a traditional habit of people who are using to deal or have online transaction. People who prefer to buy online tend to confirm
these deal
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this deal
these deals
because of they cannot go out or have a busy schedule.
Moreover
, they prefer to buy international brands from international site like Amazon and Jemia
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Through buying or shopping online; they can obtain international products which may be not existed in
local market
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the local market
.
In addition
, customers through using online credit card may get
offer
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offered
from
bank
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the bank
a bank
banks
who encourage their customers to buy online.
In contrast
, they may face cheating, deceiving or stealing; people who prefer buying online
.
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.
Hackers can get their credit card information; if they used insecure connection. Hackers tend to build
similar web site
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a similar web site
to be able to get (attain) customer's money and their credit card information. Buying online depends on
website
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the website
a website
websites
or company reputation because customers may receive unsuitable size, modified product quality or increasing
price
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prices
.

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