the chart below shows informtion about wages for health care professionals in four diffrent countries.summarize the information.
the chart below compares the average monthly salaries for qualified healthcare professionals in four different
countries
between nurses
and doctors
.
it is clear that
the incomes of doctors
and nurses
in country
d, which receive health care professionals from abroad is
the highest income and Correct subject-verb agreement
are
country
Correct article usage
the country
allocate
the lowest income Correct subject-verb agreement
allocates
with
monthly $35 for Change preposition
apply
nurses
and $64 for doctors
.
this
chart can obviuosly
show us the most important reason Correct your spelling
obviously
of
the nurse shortage in some Change preposition
for
countries
,nurses
and doctors
all over the world, prefer to work for high salaries and because of this
they are decide
to migrate to the advanced Change the verb form
decide
countries
,which have vacancies to fill with better
situation from their own Add an article
the better
a better
country
and this
causes a
serious issues in those Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
countries
which supply healthcare professionals to others countries
for example
, there is
an epidemic particular diseases in some Change the verb form
are
countries
and they do not have supply to administer patients and this
can causes
a national disaster for that Change the verb form
cause
country
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, nurses, doctors, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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