the chart below shows informtion about wages for health care professionals in four diffrent countries.summarize the information.

the chart below shows informtion about wages for health care professionals in four diffrent countries.summarize the information.
the chart below compares the average monthly salaries for qualified healthcare professionals in four different
countries
between
nurses
and
doctors
.
it is clear that
the incomes of
doctors
and
nurses
in
country
d, which receive health care professionals from abroad
is
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the highest income and
country
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the country
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allocate
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the lowest income
with
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monthly $35 for
nurses
and $64 for
doctors
.
this
chart can
obviuosly
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obviously
show us the most important reason
of
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the nurse shortage in some
countries
,
nurses
and
doctors
all over the world, prefer to work for high salaries and because of
this
they
are decide
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to migrate to the advanced
countries
,which have vacancies to fill with
better
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the better
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situation from their own
country
and
this
causes
a
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serious issues in those
countries
which supply healthcare professionals to others
countries
for example
, there
is
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an epidemic particular diseases in some
countries
and they do not have supply to administer patients and
this
can
causes
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a national disaster for that
country
because soon or late a huge number of people will be dead there.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, nurses, doctors, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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