the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The

six

pie charts illustrate the

proportion

of using

water

in different fields in

six

districts around the world. The

water

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occupies more

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% in four

areas

which are South

America

, Africa, Central

Asia

and South East

Asia

, chief of all,

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Asia

has the largest

proportion

of

water

used for

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,

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for 88%. The

second

rank is Africa which comprises about 84% and the

percentage

of agricultural

use

of

water

in South East

Asia

is slightly lower than

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(81%).

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south

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America

contributes 71%

in

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agricultural

use

. Compared to South

America

, North

America

and Europe only have around half

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of

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South

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America

for agriculture.

However

, these two districts have about 50% in industrial

water

use

, which are 48% and 53% respectively. Other

areas

have

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small

percentage

water

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using

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industrial

use

, especially

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Central

Asia

only has 5%.

Moreover

, all of these

six

areas

have less than 20%

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domestic

use

. South

America

has the largest

proportion

in

this

field which is 19% and Central

Asia

has the least

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same as South East

Asia

(7%).

According to

these

six

charts, the

areas

which are including many developed countries will have a larger

proportion

of

water

use

in industry development.

On the contrary

, the districts which contain many developing countries are using more

water

for developing agriculture. Compared to these two purposes, domestic

use

occupies the least

percentage

in

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water

use

.