You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are currently attending a course which is not the same as per the description in the admission brochure. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter, state which course you are enrolled in provide details about the noted differences suggest what actions would you like him to take

Dear Sir/Madam, I am
Mr.
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Ajay Parab studying in
first
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year of Analytics
course
in your reputed institute. I took the admission after checking a
course
structure provided in the brochure on your college website. I was really fascinated with opportunities to learn in the institute.
However
, after spending two months in the college, I feel
course
details in the admission brochure doesn't match with actual
course
delivery. There were
plethora
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of languages mentioned in the
brouchure
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brochure
including but not limited to python, r,
sql
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SQL
.
However
, in actual
teaching
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it only
consits
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consists
of
microsoft
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excel,
sql
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SQL
, c++ and
overview
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of machine learning.
Also
, in the
brochure
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it was mentioned that students will have practical learning on Industrial projects.
However
, there are neither industrial projects nor academic projects.
This
will not help me to get
secured
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job after my
course
completion. I request you to check with
concerned
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faculty for
course
delivery. And make sure our career doesn't get
squander
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. Your
Failthfully
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Faithfully
, Ajay

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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