You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are currently attending a course which is not the same as per the description in the admission brochure. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter, state which course you are enrolled in provide details about the noted differences suggest what actions would you like him to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am
Mr.
Ajay Parab studying in Change the punctuation
Mr
first
year of Analytics Change the article
the first
course
in your reputed institute. I took the admission after checking a course
structure provided in the brochure on your college website. I was really fascinated with opportunities to learn in the institute. However
, after spending two months in the college, I feel course
details in the admission brochure doesn't match with actual course
delivery.
There were plethora
of languages mentioned in the Add an article
a plethora
brouchure
including but not limited to python, r, Correct your spelling
brochure
sql
. Correct your spelling
SQL
However
, in actual teaching
it only Add a comma
,teaching
consits
of Correct your spelling
consists
microsoft
excel, Change the capitalization
Microsoft
sql
, c++ and Correct your spelling
SQL
overview
of machine learning. Correct article usage
an overview
Also
, in the brochure
it was mentioned that students will have practical learning on Industrial projects. Add a comma
,brochure
However
, there are neither industrial projects nor academic projects. This
will not help me to get secured
job after my Add an article
a secured
course
completion.
I request you to check with concerned
faculty for Correct article usage
the concerned
course
delivery. And make sure our career doesn't get squander
.
Your Change the form of the verb
squandered
Failthfully
,
AjayCorrect your spelling
Faithfully
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,