Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person culture and character from their choice of clothes.

Some people think that
choices
Suggestion
the choices
of outfit of human beings
are assumed
Suggestion
assume
their manner and personality. While, I accept that person's dress tells something about them, but I do not completely agree with
this
point of view.
First
of all, I would like to tell how a human being 's choice of clothes show theirs culture. In many different parts of the world some people have
wearing
Suggestion
worn
their own traditional style of clothing.
Therefore
clothes can reveal the culture of a person.
For
example Sikh
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example, Sikh
wear turban, Muslim women wear
burka
,. It is just respect for their cultural, regional. It gives us an idea about the background of the individual, not about his or her character or personality. Beside
this
persons are
wear
Suggestion
wearing
dresses according to the fashion. They change their mind with fashion. Sometimes they wear Morden dresses, but they live with passion, ambition and adventure lifestyle. Choice of clothes may tell us about the persons how will
they
of them or themselves
their
concern about to be smart.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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