Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person culture and character from their choice of clothes.

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Some people think that

choices

Suggestion

the choices

of outfit of human beings

are assumed

Suggestion

assume

their manner and personality. While, I accept that person's dress tells something about them, but I do not completely agree with

this

point of view.

First

of all, I would like to tell how a human being 's choice of clothes show theirs culture. In many different parts of the world some people have

wearing

Suggestion

worn

their own traditional style of clothing.

Therefore

clothes can reveal the culture of a person.

For

example Sikh

Accept comma addition

example, Sikh

wear turban, Muslim women wear

burka

,. It is just respect for their cultural, regional. It gives us an idea about the background of the individual, not about his or her character or personality. Beside

this

persons are

wear

Suggestion

wearing

dresses according to the fashion. They change their mind with fashion. Sometimes they wear Morden dresses, but they live with passion, ambition and adventure lifestyle. Choice of clothes may tell us about the persons how will

they

of them or themselves

their

concern about to be smart.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about person culture and character from their choice of clothes.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?"

Television has diminished the free time of people. It can make people lazy and not socialize with others. Do you agree or disagree?

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?