Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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a few seconds

, people can buy things on the

internet

what they need like foods, household goods or air tickets.

This

convenient service makes our lives better than before. But, some shopkeepers are saying

that is

stealing our

job

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jobs

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essay will discuss about advantages and disadvantages. People's lives were changed after

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creating

the

internet

. Because of it, people can put their money into account and buy products with it. After ordering, the goods are delivered by drivers. So, it made our lives convenient.

For example

, in the past, if people want to buy a book, they have to go by themselves, but now, Amazon site is a one of a site; just push a button, drivers carry the book to our houses. So, we can lessen our burden to carry that

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our places and it is faster than us,

also

, we can save our time. For these reasons,

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the internet

is very important in our life.

On the other hand

, shopkeepers are complaining that

this

service can steal their business, because, people can use their mobile phone to purchase rather than to go outside. It can cause serious problem

such

as shops will be missing in the future.

For example

, a merchant feels depressed about it, so, he can close his store. His consumers who are used to purchase nearby their house can be

confused

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confusing

In addition

, most stores can be closed and workers can lose their jobs.

As a result

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creating

definite article

the

internet

, there are some benefits and several disadvantages. Most people's lives became convenient,

however

, others are not. In my view,

government

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the government

should make some rules for merchants and encourage them.

Fri Jan 17 2020

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

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