You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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Dear John I am writing

this

letter to inquire about the file I forget in my room while I was staying

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your house.

Although

, after attending

business

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a business

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seminar in

Sydney

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the Sydney

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auditorium, I arrived late at home because it was almost 90 minutes drive from the auditorium and your house which make me very tired because

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am not used to

for

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long drives. As

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remember

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keep my things on the side table

to my bed.

Its

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red

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a red

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colour file with my company logo on top of it and MOU agreement title

written

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on it. Though,

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the Next

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morning when

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was leaving for the airport, I forget

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put in my bag, which is very important because

this

file

contain

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official documents and MOU etc. I am requesting you to please send it as soon as possible to my postal address by urgent courier service. I will pay you all the courier expenses

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you

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Faithful

Omair

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Wed Oct 13 2021

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