In many countries small shops and town centers are going out of business because people tend to drive to the large-out-of town stores. This results to an increase in car use and it also means that people without cars have limited access to out of the town stores. Do you think the advantages of such development outweigh its disadvantages?

Progress is unstoppable. The development of
hugh
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
high
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out-of-town stores can be stopped and
on the other hand
those big stores
offers
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offer
hundreds of
work places
a place where work is done
workplaces
. Anyway, the increasing reality of minor stores forced
t
the thing named or in question
it
to
go
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to go
out of business is a problem that governments should see and take measures.
those
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Those
big stores are awesome.
absolutely
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Absolutely
shocking places thought to
fullfil
put in effect
fulfil
fulfils
all your needs.
in
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In
one place you can find absolutely everything, from
baterries
group of guns or missile launchers operated together at one place
batteries
to
leutecce
an arrangement of points or particles or objects in a regular periodic pattern in 2 or 3 dimensions
lattice
lettuce
the incredible wide range of products have become during the
last
years a
first
shopping option for any
buyier
a person who buys
buyer
buyers
.
several
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Several
things have shaped
this
behaviour.
the
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The
formula prices plus offers plus
undless
tiresomely long; seemingly without end
endless
easles
a small island
isles
aisles
full of whatever you could think of has been
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
.
however not
Accept comma addition
However, not
However not
without impact on other spots of the market.
minor
of lesser importance or stature or rank
Minor
stores are going out of business and with that, of course, the number of unemployed people has raised.
something
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Something
shoul
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
have been done.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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