The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart presents the major causes of the reduction in agricultural
land
,
while
the table compares how different regions of the world were affected by them.
This
information is presented for North America, Europe, and Oceania for the period from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
, Europe suffered more from farmland
degradation
than the other regions, and the main reasons were deforestation and over-cultivation. It is clear from the pie chart that there were four main sources of global
land
degradation
. Over-grazing causes the largest share of
land
degradation
with 35%, followed by deforestation (30%). Over-cultivation ranks
third
with 28%, and the remaining 7% results from other factors. From the table, we can see that each of these four factors affected the three regions differently. Europe has almost 9.8% of
degradation
due to
deforestation,
while
the impact of
this
was minimal
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Oceania and North America, with only 1.7% and 0.2% of
land
affected respectively.
In contrast
, over-grazing was the leading cause of farmland reduction in the Oceanic region (11.3%) but only accounted for less than 2% of
land
degradation
in North America.

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