Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person culture and character from their choice of clothes .do you agree or disagree?

Group of individuals
believe
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believes
that civilization and personality of individuals
is determined
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are determined
by his dress up sense.I tend with
this
statement that cloths wear by people tells many basic info about their taste and
traditions but
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traditions, but
other hand cloths are not
represent
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representing
the individual's
character
. On one side of my opinion is that outfit of any human tells us many basic information about his
culture
and tradition and represent
place
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places
a place
with he was belonged.
For instance
India has 27 States
.
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.
Every States
people
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person
wears different variety of dresses which are
recognisation
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
recognition
of their people
.
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.
all
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All
over the
world many
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world, many
countries have their own cultural outfits which tells about their
culture
. In these days western
culture
affect
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affects
my country people left their traditional dresses and wear the Western outfits most of the time
.
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.
with
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With
this
you do not know their social
behaviour
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behaviour, however
however
then
dresses do not tell the
character
of any
person
For illustrates
person
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a person
who has well dressed shows is physical level but we don't identify his/her behaviour or
character
by their costumes
.
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.
any
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Any
well dressed
person
can be a corrupt
person
. In
conclusion we
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conclusion, we
say that cloths are not identify the behaviour or
character but
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character, but
tells
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tell
us
traditions
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traditions, culture
culture
and recognise the taste of his motherland.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
the outfits are not
recognisation
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
recognition
of any persons

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