Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

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Smoking

has became

Suggestion

has become

a major concern in many industrialized territories nowadays and there should be an enacted rules to overcome

such

situation in social places. Some countries are not keen to take part and impose laws opposed to smoking in

such

places. We will consider both sides of the discussion in

this

essay. On the one hand, those countries which support enacting laws on

smoking promote

Accept comma addition

smoking, promote

the idea that

this

would have

dreadful impact

Suggestion

a dreadful impact

on citizen's health and well-being that could cause

vast majority

Suggestion

the vast majority

of diseases among infants, pregnant's women and children.

Also

smoke

Suggestion

the smoke

itself contains thousands of highly hazardous substances which could easily spread in the air and lead to inevitable consequences.

Moreover

, employees who are considerably addicted to cigarettes would definitely need to smoke every 30 minutes which could cause them career destruction.

For example

, in china, there is a penalty for everybody smoking in federal places and if that happens again, they most probably imprison the offender for three months. On the

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

hand, opponent countries against

such

law cite that they are solely dependent on importing and exporting tobacco products and that would have significant impact on their economic system. In

this

case, they mention that higher taxes have already been imposed on these products to prevent people to not to purchase them. It seems that they actually are considering to gain more profits rather than their citizen's health and

that is

why there would be no restricted rules for smoking.

Suggestion

It's

worth to note that, in any profitable business like

this

, mafia groups will not permit the government to ruin their incredibly high earnings. Overall, I would tend to side with countries where have enacted law against smoking in public places. It would be the prime decision which would be beneficial

for

Suggestion

people's health and

also

for economic either.

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Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

Include an introduction and conclusion

In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?

Some people believe that it is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places with a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

How can governments encourage people to take more exercise?

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.