Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

Smoking
has became
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has become
a major concern in many industrialized territories nowadays and there should be an enacted rules to overcome
such
situation in social places. Some countries are not keen to take part and impose laws opposed to smoking in
such
places. We will consider both sides of the discussion in
this
essay. On the one hand, those countries which support enacting laws on
smoking promote
Accept comma addition
smoking, promote
the idea that
this
would have
dreadful impact
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a dreadful impact
on citizen's health and well-being that could cause
vast majority
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the vast majority
of diseases among infants, pregnant's women and children.
Also
,
smoke
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the smoke
itself contains thousands of highly hazardous substances which could easily spread in the air and lead to inevitable consequences.
Moreover
, employees who are considerably addicted to cigarettes would definitely need to smoke every 30 minutes which could cause them career destruction.
For example
, in china, there is a penalty for everybody smoking in federal places and if that happens again, they most probably imprison the offender for three months. On the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
hand, opponent countries against
such
law cite that they are solely dependent on importing and exporting tobacco products and that would have significant impact on their economic system. In
this
case, they mention that higher taxes have already been imposed on these products to prevent people to not to purchase them. It seems that they actually are considering to gain more profits rather than their citizen's health and
that is
why there would be no restricted rules for smoking.
It
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It's
worth to note that, in any profitable business like
this
, mafia groups will not permit the government to ruin their incredibly high earnings. Overall, I would tend to side with countries where have enacted law against smoking in public places. It would be the prime decision which would be beneficial
for
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to
people's health and
also
for economic either.
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