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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.
#information #languages #speakers
The supplied table shows data about the number of 6 languages namely Mandarin Chinese, Arabic, English, Portuguese, Spanish and Hindi as the L1. At a first glance, it is clear to see that the quantity of speaking in Mandarin Chinese
are
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 the highest level contrast
of
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to
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 other
language
 users. The Portuguese
is
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 the
last
 column in
this
 section. As is presented in the table, in the first place comes Chinese native speakers, about 900 million people,
while
 additional
language
 users are nearly 200 million, so
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totally
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just
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 over one billion. Using Spanish as a
second
language
 is 5 times less than natives (70 and 350 respectively) from 420 million people. It is interesting to note that,
using
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 English as L2
two
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 times more than natives in the world. Turning to the details Portuguese and Arabic
population
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populations
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 are similar, but
interests
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the interests
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of
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in
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 the Arabian
language
 are almost a quarter.
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