Modern forms of communication such as email an messaginh have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends.This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There's no doubt

that increasing of

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that increasing

technology has transformed people's communication, so that people can contact via email or messaging. Even though people think that contemporary

Kind

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The kind

A kind

of communication has

abbrivated

the

time which

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time, which

people spend seeing their friends. Should we look at back we can see that people communicated by phone or letter,

however it

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however, it

wasn'

comfortable and reasonable for them, even if they, it took a lot of time. Nowadays people utilize

new current form

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a new current form

the new current form

new current forms

of communication, because it's more convenient and affordable.Everyone can send messages, photos

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videos to their friends, despite the fact that their friends are staying more remote place than

them

people in general

they

For

instance I

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instance, I

have a friend who studies abroad.I can speak with him whenever I want and

also

we can see our faces very nearly. Because of mass

medias I still

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media, I still

media I still

keep in touch with him.In the past

this

wasn'

possible, you couldn'

speak more with your parents or

soulmates

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soul mates

. To deduce, I entirely disagree with the statement that was given in the question and definitely believe that modern communications have greatly increased people's social lives

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