Many nowadays prefer online education to face to face education. Do you consider this a positive or a negative development?

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TODAY'S WORLD IS BECOMING MORE AND MORE ADVANCED DUE TO THE TECHNOLOGY UPGRADE.

HENCE

, PLETHORA OF FOLKS CHOOSE TO HAVE ONLINE CLASSES RATHER THAN ATTANDING TRADITIONAL SCHOOL.

THIS

ESSAY WILL BELIEVE THAT THE E- LEARNIG HAS IT'S BOTH ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES. FISRTLY,

THIS

ESSSAY WILL DISCUSS IT'S MAJOR ADVANTAGE AND

SECONDLY

, WHAT ARE THE DISADVANTAGES OF ONLINE LEARNING

INSTEAD

OF TRADITIONAL SCHOOL. ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME PROS OF E-LEARNING IS THAT IT IS COVENIENT AS PER THE PERSON PREFFERENCE

CONSEQUENTLY

, INDIVIDUAL CAN ATTEND CLASSESS WHENEVER HE/SHE HAS TIME EVEN DURING TRAVELING IF AN INDIVIDUAL IS COMFORTABLE. AS A ARESULT, PEOPLE CAN SAVE MORE TIME FOR OTHER ESSENTIAL CHORES

THUS

, THEIR PRODUCTIVITY WOULD BE INCREASED.

FOR INSTANCE

, AS PER THE UK TEENAGERS SURVEY REVEALED THAT 90% OF THE UK YOUTH CHOOSE TO LEARN THROUGH THE INTERNET BECAISE THEY FOUND IT MORE EASY AND CONFORTABLE.

ON THE OTHER HAND

, IT DOES HAS DEVASTATING IMPACTS

SUCH

AS, WELNESS ISSUES, LACK OF SCOCIALIZATION AN SO ON.

THIS

IS BECAUSE, PEOPLE RARELY GO OUT SIDE AND

THIS

MIGHT AFFECT THEIR HEALTH BY LESS PHYSICAL EXERCISE.

THIS

RESULT IN THE INTROVERT NATURE AND I THINK IT IS NOT WORTH F BEIMG SO IN

THIS

FAST PACE WORLD.

FOR EXAMPLE

, THE DEVELOPED COUNTRY'S HEALTH DATA SHOWN THAT 80% FOLKS ARE HAVING SOME TYPE OF ILLNESS,

SUCH

AS OBESIY, DEPRESSION AND MANY MORE.

THIS

BECAUSE SITTING AT ONE PLACE. HOWEVEVR, IF INDIVIDUALS USE

THIS

AS PER THEIR REQUIREMENT THAN SURELY THE THE NEGATIVE IMPACT COULD BE DECLINED. IN CONCLUSION, ONLINE LEARNING FACILOTY INDEED HAS MORE PROS THAN CONS BUT ONE SHOULD NEVER IGNORE ITS DETRIMENTAL EFFECT ON THE HEALTH.

CONSEQUENTLY

, HELATH IS WEALTH.

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Many nowadays prefer online education to face to face education. Do you consider this a positive or a negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Should the private school receive government funding?

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

More and more people relying on private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution

the carts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant