Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity.what solution can you suggest?

It is a fact that human activity always harmful to every living species,
as a result
this
may
also
lead to diminishing the natural creatures and disappearance of diversification too. There are several reasons for
such
a situation and
also
a few visible influences too. Both the aspects are explained in the ensuring paragraphs. Discussing the reasons, the most common one is that animals are used in important scientific research and helps to ad
vance in medical se
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helps to advance
c
tor. Many impo
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the medical sector
rtant drugs discoveries involved experimentation without any limitation on fauna. The other cause is cutting trees from forest to prepare papers and other household furniture that, it is detrimental for living orga
nism because of
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living organisms
a living organism
the living organism
storage of food and vegetation. The main origin to loss of biodiversity is that overusage o
f natural
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over usage
resources
such
as water, oil and energy which is dramatically destroy variety of
generat
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a variety
ion as well as flora. By
this
I mean that due to human beings whole ecosystem is disappear a
nd
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disappearing
also
fertility of land is no more for high yield of vegetables. There are some possible measures to these problems.
Firstly
, government
could intr
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the government
oduce laws to limit on various living organisms as well as on resources w
hich peop
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the resources
le consume without any extent on daily basis
. Administr
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a daily basis
at
ion firm should pro
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The administration firm
An administration firm
mote recycling the waste
also
, natural areas and wild animals should be p
rotect.
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should be protected
Secondly
, if someone cut the tre
e f
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cuts
rom sanctuary t
han put p
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the sanctuary
enalty on
them an
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a penalty
d that fund used wisely to preserve plants spec
ies in
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plant
botanical gardens.
Moreover
, every individuals
should inv
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individual
est in renewable energy from solar, wind or water power is
also
true for future generation. In conclusion, the topic, it can be
finally
commented that research on animals and consumption impact on planet. So
we sho
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the planet
uld be aware of present sit
uation and accord
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the present situation
ing to it executiv
e
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
and every humans take
care
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human
of environment
and animal
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the environment
s kin
d.
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animal

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