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Mother tongue represents the culture of the specific region. If, verbalization be no more so the civilization of that spoken

words

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word

would be vanished from earth. So, I disagree if, vocalization was

drop

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dropped

off. Spoken communication shows enlightenment of people who they

grown

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have grown

are grown

grew

up with. There are roughly 6,500 spoken

expression

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expressions

in the world which reflects the

people

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person's

background. Sanskrit was sometimes considered

mother

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the mother

of all languages. It is the earliest ancient conversation

medium but

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medium, but

now it’s words are only found in mixed languages like

Hindhi

the most widely spoken of modern Indic vernaculars; spoken mostly in the north of India; along with English it is one of the main official languages of India; usually written in Devanagari script

Hindi

, Nepali, Urdu, Punjabi etc. Sanskrit had died mainly and mixed up with other civilizations.

However

, there are many tongues which were

died

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dying

or mixed up

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

culture like Greek had died. Ancient Egyptian, character penned language used for drafts to sending others had died. The people of Egypt did not die but they did not communicate in Egyptian way. The main reason of verbalization dies, were people who left it.

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