Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society , but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like . What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world ?

One of the most controversial issues today relates to at recent years,
society
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is imagining
are imagining
that they are living in acceptable
community
, but they do not know how acceptable
society
will be
such
. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view. On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of concentration on
society
, culture and developing it in several sectors,
such
as Chinees
community
are caring about population culture in various scopes.
Also
, for several ages. Considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
this
is that for believing
that is
this
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stublish
brought about or set up or accepted; especially long established
established
meet positively ideas and statements in everywhere.
In addition
, be far away from negatively and sadly persons in school, universities and daily life.
For instance
, if you have sadly friends, you have double opportunities, may you have to bring him opportunity advice,
otherwise
, let him be far away from you. It is
also
possible to say that asking children and adults to read in every filed at future. In a
ddtion,
a component that is added to something to improve it
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for that, making ready a
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a lot
of libraries and be it attractive for residents and visitors.
Also
, create a comfortable p
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place
for tourists to spend interesting time, like libraries that exists at universities approximately and be attention to d
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develop
it. One good illustration of
this
i
s cooperate
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is cooperated
between
community
members and
this
value initiate from s
mall family
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small families
a small family
and be careful t
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of
in
making that daily habit. For e
xamole,
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
my friend working a
t
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as
a teacher, but when going back to home, she is cooking a lunch and cleaning the house.
On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact registration to sporting
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um
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game
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and making available for all.
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, f
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should handle
should be handled
for all levels. That's mean it is not d
ramtically
in a very impressive manner
dramatically
grammatically
drastically
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xpensive but
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expensive, but
must be average. People often have
this
opinion because p
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puts
put
structure for caring t
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for
children inside the
j
um
a contest with rules to determine a winner
game
like
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um
a preparation (usually made of sweetened chicle) for chewing
gum
jam
game
that near from my home. A
second
point is that caring of bodies to become healthy and low fat is an important issue for perfect
community
. A particularly good example here is Fitness Time
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um
a contest with rules to determine a winner
game
having a babysitter and it is available at any time. To sum up, as we have seen, there are no easy answers to
this
question. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe that if we want to become a perfect
society
by strongly, we must initiate by ourselves
then
we require from other to become like
this
.
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