A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: thank him for the invitation mention why you can not attend the birthday party offer to meet him some other day

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Dear

Alies

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Alice

Allies

, I hope you are doing great.

First

of all thanks for inviting me to your daughter

anita's

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birthday party.I am writing

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letter to inform you that I have an urgent meeting

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28December so

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will not able to attend

this

special day. My dear friend

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was very happy after

recieved

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received

your letter

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about for

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for

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about

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birthday

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the birthday

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party and

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am very thankful to you that you still remember me and invite

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me to

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participate me

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your daughter's day. Unfortunately,on 28 December I have a meeting with my boss regarding my

pormotion

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promotion

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meeting will be organized out of town so

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cannot attend

this

party. I want to meet you and your family.What about the

weekend?Your daughter will

also

free

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on that day .so you will come with

family

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your family

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.We will enjoy

together

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ourselves together

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. Hope you understand my problem and will wait for your reply soon. yours lovingly, Supan

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IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

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Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Use an appropriate tone

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