Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In general, International

turisim

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

incresing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

day by day.

while

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While

international

tourisim

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

terrorism

has

lot

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lots

of advantages

such

as experience

diffrent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

treditions

an inherited pattern of thought or action

traditions

tradition

allover

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all over

the

world

Accept space

It creates

lot

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a lot

of problems too.

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my opinion,

refers to the speaker or writer

would argue International

tourisim

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

has so many advantages than disadvantages.

World

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The world

is becoming very small due to technology

reveloution

act of ascertaining or fixing the value or worth of

evaluation

and airline industry.

traveling

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Travelling

Traveling

from one country to another country is very easy than ever before.

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a result, there are so many international

travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

travels

all over the

world

.Some

occations

something you have to do

occasions

locations

actions

, It creates problems with local people

because of people have

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because people have

their own traditions and religion beliefs.

ocassinally

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Occasionally

Ocassinally

, these traditions and beliefs conflicts with international

traveles

a person who changes location

travellers

for

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For

instance, few countries treat people very bad manner if the persons drink

alochal

rest

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The rest

Rest

of the

world

take

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takes

it as casual.

that's

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That's

where conflicts

starts

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start

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consequence

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a consequence

locals

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the locals

hate international

travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

travels

On the other hand

, international travel has so many benefits. Since

world

is becoming so small, knowing different cultures is

helpfulful

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hopefully

hopeful

many ways.

knowing

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Knowing

different cultures and traditions always gives an advantage of exploring the different corners of the

world

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this

way,

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signle

being or characteristic of a single thing or person

single

person boundaries are

limitted

small in range or scope

limited

to any single place.

for

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For

example, in the

world there

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world, there

are so many places where people are living very bad condition because of poverty.

international

any of several international socialist organizations

International

torusion

help them to get

raid

relieve from

rid

of their poor living conditions.

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this

way people from

developed

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developing

countries learn different angels of the

world

Although

, there are few disadvantages of international

tourisim

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

terrorism

, International

torisim

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

only way

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the only way

people can connect

togeather

in contact with each other or in proximity

together

without physical boundaries.

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my opinion

Accept space

international travel has many advantages than disadvantages.

Suggestion

the same time international

travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

should learn and respect the local culture where they are visiting.

Thu Dec 19 2019

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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater ,is a waste of money . Government must the money in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with this situation?

In many cities crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce crime levels? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

2. Is it better for people to live in the same place all their lives or to live in different places? Give reasons and examples to support your views.

We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?