Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
this
age, online shopping is popular among the people. It has a lot of
benefits but
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benefits, but
some drawbacks are
aslo
in addition
also
have.
Firstly
, online shopping is
convenience
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convenient
because
it
it is
it's
less time consuming. We do not need to go to the shops in person.
That is
why we do not cost transportation charges and we do not need to face traffic problems.
In addition
, we can get our items just staying in our house and they
deliever
bring to a destination, make a delivery
deliver
delivered
the right address.
Secondly
, we do not need to find our daily needs in every shop. We just need a smartphone or a computer and just click the stuff that we like. And we can compare the prices of
these stuff
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this stuff
from many websites.
Finally
, there are many fake websites and poor quality products everywhere.
Last
year, I bought a hoodie from online with suitable price. Unfortunately, the quality is very
poor than
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poor, then
poor then
I think. After that I never shop online until now. I think we should see reliable websites and good quality products.

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