Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor that their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Childhood obesity has become a cause of concern in Australia to an extent that two
third
of the children are obese.
This
essay will discuss why I completely disagree that schools should take measures to what their pupils eat.
Firstly
, one of the disagreements is that educational centres are for studying not for eating and exercises. Teachers are expected to teach and educate their pupils on new skills that will be useful when they graduate.
Secondly
, it is the responsibility of parents to cook their wards meal.
This
, to an extent will serve as a
grantee
a written assurance that some product or service will be provided or will meet certain specifications
guarantee
to what a
child
consume
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consumes
and may not have
negative effect
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a negative effect
on their body system because it is a
home made
made or produced in the home or by yourself
homemade
dish.
For instance
, in a recent interview of a model, who has won several awards, explained to the interviewer how she strictly eats
home
made food and how her parents ensured
herself
female pronoun; a female, or something regarded as female, e.g. a ship
she
and her siblings wakes up as early as 5:00am on a daily basis for some indoor and outdoor exercises before preparing for
school
. Parents
needs
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need
to take ownership in monitoring what their kids eat.
On the other hand
, an agreement is that the number of hours spent in schools
are more than the time spent
Suggestion
is more than the time spent
are more than the time spent
at
home
.
This
could be an
oversite
an unintentional omission resulting from failure to notice something
oversight
for parents to ignore their responsibilities and leave it for
school
teachers
that is
more concern with the
child
's studies and less concern with a
child
consume provide the kid is fine.
For example
, my sister
that is
a secondary
school
teacher, cares more
on
Suggestion
about
impacting her students with knowledge rather than controlling what her pupils eat.
This
for sure will be useful in the life of a
child
in the future either by getting a good job or becoming a successful
busines
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
person. In conclusion, it was discussed that a
school
is for learning while, a
home
is for monitoring, caring about what a
child
eats and all workouts
that is
required to be done. In my opinion, I absolutely disagree that schools should have control of a
child
's diet.

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