many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online and give your opinion.

Now a days most of
the
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day
people used to prefer online shopping on the internet than physical shopping in the store. There are several advantages of online shopping
such
as people will save their travel
time
of shopping ,compare pr
ic
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,
e,
produ
ct re
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prices
view and
product
details in different different online sites , return th
e
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,
product
without any extra cost if there is some issue with the shopping
product
like damage , colour is
su
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,
e, not deliver in
time
, fi
tt
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on
ing i
ss
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,
ue. Most important and useful thing is now a day
most
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is, now
of the prople are h
aving
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
smart phone and they are doing their online shopping from their cell phone at any place. In other way there ar
e some di
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way, there
sadvantages of online shopping
such
as people forget to spend
time
with the family and freinds due
to
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friends
this
online shopping and literarly i
ts used f
in a literal sense
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ul for work
ing
a substance that can be consumed to produce energy
fuel
foil
fool
person to refresh their mind in shopping at mall but unf
ortunate
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mall, but
ly most of the prople prepe
r onli
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
n
e shop
like better; value more highly
prefer
proper
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d most import
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shopping, and
ant is people can return the
product
if they dont like th
e sa
do not
don't
me but in door shop
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located, suited for, or taking place within a building
indoor
eople can
t
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ry the clothes at store and ask directly to seller representative for any of the query . As
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r my opinion if p
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opinion, if
having less
time
and need some urgent basis
then
s
hould go f
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basis, then
or door shooping el
se onlin
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
e shoping But
once o
searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
nce again people should go for a shopping at mall atleast
twi
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the mall
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at least
th so that they can enjoy
time
with their family and friends.
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