many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online and give your opinion.

Now a days most of

the

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day

people used to prefer online shopping on the internet than physical shopping in the store. There are several advantages of online shopping

such

as people will save their travel

time

of shopping ,compare pr

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produ

ct re

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prices

view and

product

details in different different online sites , return th

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product

without any extra cost if there is some issue with the shopping

product

like damage , colour is

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time

, fi

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ing i

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ue. Most important and useful thing is now a day

most

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(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

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smart phone and they are doing their online shopping from their cell phone at any place. In other way there ar

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way, there

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such

as people forget to spend

time

with the family and freinds due

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people

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like better; value more highly

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many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people nowadays tend to marry and have children in their thirties rather than at a younger age.Is this a positive or negative development?

Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?