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The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
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The pie chart illustrates the three countries from where the
fishes
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 are imported to the US,
while
 the table represents the total value of these
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 in billion dollars for the years 1988,1992 and 2000.
Overall
,
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Canada
 was the highest source of
fish
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 importing country
initially
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 the others
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shipped more
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 to the US. In the year 1988, the total price of the
fishes
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 imported to the US accounts for 6.57 billion dollars,
while
 in 1992,
this
 has increased to approximately $2 billion than
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.
However
, in the year 2000, there was a moderate rise in the price of
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imported
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$10.72 dollars.
On the other hand
, in 1988, 60% of the
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 are imported from
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Canada
,
while
 27% and 13% of them are from other countries and
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China.
However
, by 1992 the import from others and
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China has increased by 19% and 7%, but the shipping of
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 from
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Canada
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decreased by 26%.
Finally
, in 2000, the shipping of
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 from
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China is 30%, others are 42% and
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the
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Canada
 is 28%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fishes, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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