Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, it becomes
most simple
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more simple
simpler
for a person to purchase through
website
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the website
a website
than directly go shopping in a
boutic
a shop that sells women's clothes and jewelry
boutique
or supermarket.
This
new way of buying become possible thanks to the birth of
internet
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the internet
and new cutting edge devices
such
as computers and smartphones.
However
, in spite of, numerous benefits which represent
this
new popular development, we can
also
count some drawback. In
this
essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages that represent
this
new practice.
First
of all, the main noticeable advantages are the gain of
time
and more choices for an attractive price. Traditionally, to go shopping people have to take hours from their schedule. Once they are in the
boutic
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Baltic
boots
they have to try their clothes and that represent
additional
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the additional time
time
they lost.
Wherease
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, with
internet
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the internet
they have just to go by simple click on the website and look for the piece they need.
This
method
take
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takes
only
few minutes which
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a few minutes, which
a few minutes which
can be
use
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used
during lunch
time
or coffee break. According to the
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interviewed
have a full-
time
job
,
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,
they do not have
enought
as much as necessary
enough
spare
time
and generally they use their free
time
to have
rest
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a rest
or spend
time
with their friends and family.
Moreover
,
although
,
boutics
a small vessel for travel on water
boats
offer many
article
choice, numerous people cannot find their size or the object they are looking for. In
this
condition,
internet
become
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becomes
really
helpfull
providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
and give many
option
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options
. Indeed,
internet
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the internet
is
favorise
marked by intense agitation or emotion
feverish
favourite
globalisation give to people international selection of
clothe
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clothing
, tools and furnitures through e-commerce
such
as
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for cheap.
For example
, wish
offer
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offers
a large variety of
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on
their website for a competitive price.
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It
is an important factor which
orient
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orients
people to
buy by
obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
buy
buy buy
online. Unfortunately, where there are
benefits there
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benefits, there
are always
inconvenients
not suited to your comfort, purpose or needs
inconvenient
. In
this
case, we can quote two disadvantages unexpected delivery and
time
for waiting.
Firstly
, it is not a surprise anymore to receive the wrong
article
. Sometimes, the
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to wind or move in a spiral course
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couple
caller
does not look like the picture and a big difference can be relevant.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, in
certaine
definite but not specified or identified
certain
case, the size is smaller or larger than the selecting one.
This
often
happend
come to pass
happened
and make people disappointed. I am sure that after
this
tragic event they prefer to go back sopping by
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
.
For instance
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
bought
few years
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a few years
ago a green jacket,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
was waiting for a long
time
and really excited to
finally
have it. Once
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have received
it i
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it, I
it I
was so angry because it does not
ressembled
appear like; be similar or bear a likeness to
resemble
to the picture given by
internet
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the internet
. The size was too big for me and the shape was different.
Secondly
, generally, the commodity come from china and
this
is far away from France. The
article
have
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has
to be exported by ship or
plan
an aircraft that has a fixed wing and is powered by propellers or jets
plane
. And
this
take
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takes
a long
time
because it has to pass by the border and
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
step before. For
this
reason,
this
better to purchase directly in the shop even if it takes
few hours
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a few hours
,
this
is better than wait for one month. To conclude, buy online can be a gain of
time particulary
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time, particularly
time particularly
for full worker and offer a large game of choice for people.
However
, the
coli
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couple
can take a long
time
before to
finally
arive
reach a destination; arrive by movement or progress
arrive
arrived
arrival
at
destination
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the destination
and sometimes people can be
disapointed
disappointingly unsuccessful
disappointed
. I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
despite these
inconvenients
not suited to your comfort, purpose or needs
inconvenient
advantages can
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
the disadvantages.
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