Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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more simple

simpler

for a person to purchase through

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the website

a website

than directly go shopping in a

boutic

a shop that sells women's clothes and jewelry

boutique

or supermarket.

This

new way of buying become possible thanks to the birth of

internet

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the internet

and new cutting edge devices

such

as computers and smartphones.

However

, in spite of, numerous benefits which represent

this

new popular development, we can

also

count some drawback. In

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will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages that represent

this

new practice.

First

of all, the main noticeable advantages are the gain of

time

and more choices for an attractive price. Traditionally, to go shopping people have to take hours from their schedule. Once they are in the

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they have to try their clothes and that represent

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the additional time

time

they lost.

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they have just to go by simple click on the website and look for the piece they need.

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takes

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used

during lunch

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they do not have

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as much as necessary

enough

spare

time

and generally they use their free

time

to have

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a rest

or spend

time

with their friends and family.

Moreover

,

although

,

boutics

a small vessel for travel on water

boats

offer many

article

choice, numerous people cannot find their size or the object they are looking for. In

this

condition,

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becomes

really

helpfull

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and give many

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options

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marked by intense agitation or emotion

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globalisation give to people international selection of

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clothing

, tools and furnitures through e-commerce

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their website for a competitive price.

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people to

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obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction

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online. Unfortunately, where there are

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benefits, there

are always

inconvenients

not suited to your comfort, purpose or needs

inconvenient

. In

this

case, we can quote two disadvantages unexpected delivery and

time

for waiting.

Firstly

, it is not a surprise anymore to receive the wrong

article

. Sometimes, the

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does not look like the picture and a big difference can be relevant.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

, in

certaine

definite but not specified or identified

certain

case, the size is smaller or larger than the selecting one.

This

often

happend

come to pass

happened

and make people disappointed. I am sure that after

this

tragic event they prefer to go back sopping by

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

.

For instance

,

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I

bought

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a few years

ago a green jacket,

i

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I

was waiting for a long

time

and really excited to

finally

have it. Once

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I

have received

it i

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it, I

it I

was so angry because it does not

ressembled

appear like; be similar or bear a likeness to

resemble

to the picture given by

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the internet

. The size was too big for me and the shape was different.

Secondly

, generally, the commodity come from china and

this

is far away from France. The

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have

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has

to be exported by ship or

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plane

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takes

a long

time

because it has to pass by the border and

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

step before. For

this

reason,

this

better to purchase directly in the shop even if it takes

few hours

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a few hours

,

this

is better than wait for one month. To conclude, buy online can be a gain of

time particulary

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time, particularly

time particularly

for full worker and offer a large game of choice for people.

However

, the

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can take a long

time

before to

finally

arive

reach a destination; arrive by movement or progress

arrive

arrived

arrival

at

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the destination

and sometimes people can be

disapointed

disappointingly unsuccessful

disappointed

. I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

despite these

inconvenients

not suited to your comfort, purpose or needs

inconvenient

advantages can

outweight

be heavier than

outweigh

the disadvantages.