There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

#evidence #activities #temperatures

Despite knowing about climate change, human activities

has been causing

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have been causing

have caused

global

tempratures

the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)

temperatures

higher.

This

essay will examine the main causes of

this

actual issue and possible solutions. The two

mains

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main

causes of higher temperatures are globalisation and deforestation.

Firstly

, overpopulation are the major issues of

environement

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. People must be

feed

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fed

and dress, for

this

reason industries produces continuously and they generate

polution

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

and waste. According to jack

prevost

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Prevost

a searcher from the CNRS, 90% of the climate change is due to

pollution

. It is estimated that 60% of

this

pollution

release

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released

in the form of harmful clouds and 40% is caused by

chemical product

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chemical products

a chemical product

dumped in river and sea. The searcher wrote in

this

artical

nonfictional prose forming an independent part of a publication

article

that industries and transport are the

mains

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main

factors.

Secondly

, industries and household habits must destroy trees to produce energy.

However

, it releases CO2 in

air

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the air

and

this

will increase the temperatures and cause global warming.

For instance

, in

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the UK

a searcher from

oxford

a university town in northern Mississippi; home of William Faulkner

Oxford

university publish an article on the

futurescientist

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future scientist

magazine where he

estimate

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estimates

that the level of temperature will reach a peak in 2050.

Consequently

, people and industries have to change their habits because they consume more than they need. Today, we use all our essential

resources but

Accept comma addition

resources, but

what do we will delegate to our descendant

Accept space

Some

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Any

possible solution to

this

problems

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problem

to limit

production

and

engage in

make

more propaganda about

environment

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the environment

. Currently, it is estimated that only 60% of the global

production

are used

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is used

consumer

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consumers

the consumer

. The 30% are throw and only a few percent

are recycled

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is recycled

. I believe that if

overconsumtion

are

limited

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limiting

the energy used and amount of

pollution

will considerably decrease. For

exemple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

examples

, in

norway

a constitutional monarchy in northern Europe on the western side of the Scandinavian Peninsula; achieved independence from Sweden in 1905

Norway

, the government encouraged local

production

and have waste and

pollution

policy.

Moreover

this

effort should

also

ne done by the population they should recycle and limit their purchases to the strict minimum. To support

this

argument we can retake the

exemple

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

of suede where the government

make

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makes

a lot of propaganda to

sensibilize

make sensitive or aware

sensibilise

people with environment issues. In conclusion, people’s activities have a negative impact on the environment and that level up

global temperature

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global temperatures

the global temperature

. In

this

essay, we discussed two mains causes

Accept space

globalisation and deforestation if it is

mananeged

be successful; achieve a goal

managed

correctly by limiting

production

and

engage in

make

more propaganda to sensibilise the population global warming will

thus

be avoided.

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