Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or services (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

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Price

is generally the most important factor when buying products,

such

as cell phones, or services,

for example

medical care. While I partially agree with the statement, I tend to think that there are other parameters as well that must be given due importance,

for instance

, warranty and customer service support. In

this

market oriented economy range of choices available has made people far too much

price

conscious. By

this

I mean to say that, products or services with identical

features but

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features, but

different brands are priced differently, one priced exorbitantly high and other

price

too low. In

this

scenario,

majority

Suggestion

the majority

of the people buy the products or services which

costs

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cost

them less.

However

, in my opinion, there are other aspects associated with

the high

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the highest

higher

price

that must be looked into before making a buy decision. Many people generally ignore the vital parameters

such

warranty

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a warranty

, guarantee and after sales customer support. Some products charge a premium

price

for these services,

hence

they are a

little

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less

overpriced than other similar products that might not offer

such

facilities. To give an example, Apple iPhone that usually costs higher than other smart phones, comes with not only two

year’s

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year

repair or replacement guarantee, but

also

the company provides incomparable customer service support. After

analyzing

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

the risks associated with the gadget’s breakdown, the purchaser may

fee

undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind

feel

that Apple

IPhone

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iPhone

that is

overpriced is worth buying. To conclude, even though I agree that the most important factor for any purchase is

price

, the buyer should

also

consider to mitigate the risks of failure before buying the cheaper products or services.

Mon Nov 25 2019

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Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or services (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays more and more children acquire unhealthy eating habits. Why is it happening? What can be done to solve this issue?

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the hist should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems.