Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. as many as two thirds of children are now obese. schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. to what extent do you agree with thhis statement?

An obesity is a disease which

is continuesly Increasing

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has continuously been increasing

is continuously Increasing

has continuously increased

is continually Increasing

is continuously increased

continuously increases

in

childern

a young person of either sex

children

in Australia, and 33% of

chilldren

a young person of either sex

children

are already obese. Many people

believe

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Believe

that schools are responsible to monitor on their

staudent's

a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution

students

student's

student

exercise

and eating

habbits

an established custom

habits

while others

contradit

be in contradiction with

contradict

this

statement.

This

essay

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The essay

Essay

will discuss why I

am firmaly oppose

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am firmly opposed

am firmly opposing

am firmly oppose

have firmly opposed

firmly oppose

it. There are numerous reasons behind the truth that why schools ought not be responsible

to

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for

monitor

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Monitor

the student's diet and

exercise

amount, but the most persuasive one is that it is not the

role

of teachers. As teachers are there to

educate

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Educate

them,

there

of them or themselves

their

role

is not to keep the record of

exercise

and eating

habbits

an established custom

habits

of the students in fact it is the

role

of the parents. Teachers or schools can only educate them about the benefits of

execise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

and nutrition

therefore

it is the parent's duty to make their

children

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Children

to eat healthy and do

exercise

.

Thus

, the

schools

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schools'

school's

role

is not to monitor what their students eat and how much

exercise

they do.

Secondly

, the students can feel inferior if a teacher will ask them about what they have eaten in front of the class. Some students are very

soft

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Soft

hearted

,

Accept space

,

and they feel shame when a teacher

ask

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asks

anything personal

therefore

the chances of feeling inferior are great if a teacher

will

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Will

ask or guide them to eat less and do

exercise

becuase

for the reason that; on account of

because

they are obese.

Study

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A study

The study

have shown

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has shown

shows

that every year 0.5% students do suicide

becuase

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Because

Becuase

of feeling inferior in front the class, and the percentage can increase if schools would involve in

this

matter.

This

essay discussed

the

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The

reasons why schools ought not to take

this

responsiblity

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

. In conclusion, schools can only educate to students about it,

however

, it is the

parent

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A parent

Parent

The parent

who should monitor their children's

execise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

exercises

and eating

habbits

an established custom

habits

.