The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops In town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, people are being influenced by the online shopping.They are getting several benefits from that.
This
tendency has led some people to say that
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growth of online shopping will be a reason for dying out of
tradition
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traditional
shops in town and cities.
Hence
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I agree as much as disagree with
this
statement. There are fewer reasons to agree with
this
sentence.
Firstly
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the most considerable reason behind it
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will be a lack of
time
for people. To elaborate
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in today's rapidly changing world
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people
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who spend their most of
time
in their work
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have scarcity of
time
.
Thus
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apparently do not have enough
time
to visit
individual shop
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an individual shop
and do shopping.Eventually
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online shopping will be less
time
consuming sort of shopping for them.As the local shop will be neglected by
such
people in near future.
Secondly
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online shopping is becoming more convenient for consumers.To illustrate
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since
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customers are provided with a tremendous offers and benefits on different products at low cost
compare
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compared
to the local shops
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people will not so keen to buy that same
products
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product
from their nearby shops.
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On
the contrary, in buying some rudimentary things
such
as milk
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sweets and other dairy products
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in
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
people would not put trust on online shopping.
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Thus, they
will have to go outside for shopping
such
things from local shops.
Moreover
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somepeole
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simply
simple
do not compromise with the quality of products.
Thus they
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Thus, they
will purchase
ther
of them or themselves
their
the
other
desire products from local shops after ensuring the quality of it rather than purchase just only showing the images of products on online shopping. To conclude
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undoubtedly
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The trend of online shopping will be increased day by day
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but
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the exhaustion
exhaustion
of local shops will be
also
remained.

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