Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubt that living abroad has become commonplace in the light of globalization.
However
, a school of thought holds that living overseas could make people suffer from social and practical trouble. In
this
essay, I will examine the problems associated with
this
trend before looking at some of its benefits. On the one hand, individuals moving to another country are likely to face alienation.
This
can be attributed to discrimination and bullying in certain parts of the world. They are often browbeaten by a group of people
as a result
of their nationalities and appearances, which makes them reluctant to communicate and become more reserved.
Moreover
, people staying in a foreign may encounter culture shock. In the long run,
this
would cause them to become depressed, or even commit suicide.
On the other hand
, living in another country is not without benefits. Exposing to sufferings could be a valuable asset to gain experience in a new land. When people brave the problems that they run
into in another country
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into another country
, they will have an opportunity to improve various skills
such
as problem solving ability, flexibility...
to
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To
help their workflow.
Moreover
, living abroad
also
gives
individuals
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individuals'
individual
individual's
connections from all over the world, so they would have an understanding of many cultures and a new light about other nations. In conclusion, regardless of social and practical problems that people who live overseas are likely to have, it is still a good way for them to experience and gain a wealth of interesting knowledge and skills.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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