Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of our lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some would argue that humans, these days, are being controlled by

technology

, while others say that advancements in

technology

has greatly benefited humankind.

Although

recent developments in science and

technology

has adversely affected the employment rate, I believe it has helped people form new acquaintances. On the one hand, incorporation of electronic equipment, be it robots or advanced machinery, have severely impacted the job vacancies. Having got the state of the art production or testing machines the need to have manual operations- unlike the past- is becoming redundant practice.

As a result

, many job aspirants- despite having potential skills- are left unemployed and existing jobs are

also

jeopardised.

This

automation can usher in continuous production without halting, barring occasional services, has provided an opportunity to employees to make their workplace automated- replacing the workforce by machines. The layoff 2000 employees at Maruti Suzuki's production plant in Gurugram by the introduction of robots bears testimony to

this

On the other hand

, modern gadgets are assisting people to strengthen their family bonds and form new ones. These gizmos help to contact not only their immediate family members, but

also

to become friends with new people. The Internet,

for instance

, has transformed the whole world into a global village and individuals and now are exploring new people and broadening the horizons of knowledge about the culture of other people.

This

transformation has eradicated the previously existed biases on the basis of caste or religion making countries multicultural. In conclusion, while modern

technology

breakthroughs handmade many people jobless and threatened the existing jobs, it is certain that these developments are assisting people to socialize.

Tue Nov 12 2019

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Finally
In a nutshell
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