In many countries, the age of criminals is getting lower. Give reasons and solutions to the problem. Support your position with relevant example.

In a lot
af
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
governments the age of humans who do
crim
(criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act
crime
crimes
things is getting down. There are some causes of
this
such
us
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
schools and parents
dont
do not
don't
look good for their children or banning for
this
is not strong, and
my
belonging to me
mine
from opinion solution of
this
problems
Suggestion
problem
is that parents must spend more time with their children and states could do ban for
this
more hard. It could be good if
theachers
a person whose occupation is teaching
teachers
at school or fathers and mother could
spent
Suggestion
spend
more time with
thieir
of them or themselves
their
young, grow up children.
Whis
Suggestion
Whilst
talking
their
people in general
they
can study them what is
goog
having desirable or positive qualities especially those suitable for a thing specified
good
and what is bad. I thing that in
early ages
Suggestion
the early ages
of their life it could be changed. If
parent
Suggestion
parents
a parent
have not time for
this
it could do elder brother or sister, and other close relatives.
Because as
Accept comma addition
Because, as
they already went
this
way they can understand them.
To day
Suggestion
Today
in most of countries in schools have
psiciators
a female person who has the same parents as another person
sisters
. It is very help to government to
decrise
decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
crim
(criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act
crime
in
country
Suggestion
the country
.
For example
, according to academic
researchs
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
talk with
psiciator
a plane figure bounded by two radii and the included arc of a circle
sector
solicitor
help change humans from the bad way. Another reason of increasing criminals at early ages is the government, because there have not strong ban for
this
. And doing ban for
this
more
stronge
being definitely out of the ordinary and unexpected; slightly odd or even a bit weird
strange
for
this
they can
decrise
decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
crim
(criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act
crime
. Before
to do
Suggestion
doing
something wrong humans will be thing
twisly
. For
examly
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
,
statistic
Suggestion
statistical
statistics
information show that in countries where banning for crime is strong criminals less for 36% than in other states. In
concluation I
Accept comma addition
conclusion, I
conclusion I
would say that young people
is
Suggestion
are
our feature and I
bealive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that with all ways and methods we must avoid them from crime and protect them.

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