In many countries, the age of criminals is getting lower. Give reasons and solutions to the problem. Support your position with relevant example.
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af
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of
crim
things is getting down. There are some causes of (criminal law) an act punishable by law; usually considered an evil act
crime
crimes
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schools and parents to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
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mine
this
problems
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problem
this
more hard.
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at school or fathers and mother could a person whose occupation is teaching
teachers
spent
more time with Suggestion
spend
thieir
young, grow up children. of them or themselves
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good
early ages
of their life it could be changed. If Suggestion
the early ages
parent
have not time for Suggestion
parents
a parent
this
it could do elder brother or sister, and other close relatives. Because as
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Because, as
this
way they can understand them. To day
in most of countries in schools have Suggestion
Today
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decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
crim
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crime
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. Suggestion
the country
For example
, according to academic researchs
talk with systematic investigation to establish facts
research
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help change humans from the bad way. Another reason of increasing criminals at early ages is the government, because there have not strong ban for a plane figure bounded by two radii and the included arc of a circle
sector
solicitor
this
. And doing ban for this
more stronge
for being definitely out of the ordinary and unexpected; slightly odd or even a bit weird
strange
this
they can decrise
decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
crim
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crime
to do
something wrong humans will be thing Suggestion
doing
twisly
. For examly
, an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
statistic
information show that in countries where banning for crime is strong criminals less for 36% than in other states.
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statistical
statistics
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are
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that with all ways and methods we must avoid them from crime and protect them.accept as true; take to be true
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believed
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