You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear

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Nejad

, My name is Ehijie Christopher and most times my friends call me Christopher. I just moved into the new Unit 2B which is the duplex building directly opposite your house. I have seen your kids around and they have started to get acquainted with my children. I have two sons and one daughter. I presume you must have seen them ride their bicycles close to your parking area. I will like to inform you that

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Saturday 19th November my daughter will be 10 years old. I have made her a promise that we will hold a big party for her. I will

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celebration on Saturday. It is going to start

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12pm and it will be a lot of fun. I want to

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let you know that the party will mainly be a children’s party, but there will

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for parents to have a nice time and get to know each other. I have made

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for a game truck, bouncing castle and a comedian. There will be quite a lot of noise from these kids. Please bear with us. Hoping to see you there. Regards, Xis

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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