It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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Punishing children at an early age to make them learn correct and incorrect actions

Suggestion

are

debatable. Some people think it is important to punish kids at

small age

Suggestion

the small age

a small age

small ages

to help them distinct or

differenciate

mark as different

differentiate

right and wrong acts.

This

essay will discuss why

punishment

is not the best option

Suggestion

for

small kids and would be appropriate only as a

last

resort. Explaining what they did and helping children identify their

action

by elaborating the effects caused by their actions would be best

solution

Suggestion

solved

. Often shouting or yelling at a child on the instance of mistake committed, could put them in fearful state and might break their confidence.

For example

, a child might try to avoid something new or even skip a new task fearing that an unsuccessful outcome might cause them trouble or

punishment

. Proper explanation of

consiquences

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequences

consequence

would help them understand their mistake.

Otherwise

, showing the outcome of an incorrect

action

would help them adopt corrective measures easily.

Instead

punishment

could

develope

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

hatredness

the emotion of intense dislike; a feeling of dislike so strong that it demands action

hatreds

in the child and stop them from sharing things.

For instance

, an act of throwing an empty can on

road

Suggestion

the road

, could be corrected by explaining the consequence of someone getting hurt or falling down by stamping over it. Making kids understand the outcome of wrong doings will help them realise the effects of their

action

Punishment

should only be a

last

resort for corrective

action

However

, parents or teacher can use the

unharmful

techniques

such

as no playing hour for a day or two, not allowing movies for a week, no outing or fishing on

weekend

Suggestion

weekends

the weekend

a weekend

and so on. Educating kids on effects of

worng

not correct; not in conformity with fact or truth

wrong

doings would

creat

make or cause to be or to become

create

creates

a better understanding and help them learn why they should not do that.

This

essay concludes saying

punishment

is not the best method to help children learn right and wrong at an early age.

Therefore

, it is

adivisable

worthy of being recommended or suggested; prudent or wise

advisable

to use

punishment

as the

last

option,

instead

educating them on the outcomes of right and wrong acts would be

the wiser

Suggestion

the wisest

decision.

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