The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph compares the rate of
people
going to a movie
theatre on different days of a
week in the years 2003, 2005 and 2007.
Correct article usage
the
Overall
, the number of people
going to a theatre on weekends is higher than the weekdays. All days saw a fluctuated
Replace the word
fluctuating
trend
with Monday, Saturday and Sunday experienced
an upward Wrong verb form
experiencing
trend
, while
Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday saw a downward trend
. Friday numbers are constant in
all the years.
In 2003 ,10% of Change preposition
apply
people
visited movie
theatres on Monday, which is lowest
of all the days in the year, Correct article usage
the lowest
while
40% of people
watched a movie
outside on Saturdays which is the highest of the year. Sunday movie
watchers contributed to
30% in 2003. Despite improvement in the number of film watchers on Monday, Saturday and Sunday to just under 15%, 45% and around 35%, respectively in 2005 the figures went down Change preposition
apply
at the end
of the period.
On the other side, Wednesday theatre visitors are around 15% in 2003 and declined steadily to just under 10% by 2007. Tuesdays and Thursdays have followed the same trend
with a decline in the figures at the end
. In contrast
, Friday cinema visitors remained stable in all the years with
30%.Change preposition
at
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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