You are planning a holiday in another country and would like a friend to accompany you. Write a letter to the friend asking him/her to join you and explain: invitation - Why are you taking a holiday? - What is your holiday plan? Explain, simples/ future - Why would you like him/her to go with you?

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Dear Linda, How

things

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going since our

last

meeting? I’m writing today to invite you to be my travel partner

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a journey through Brazil. After six long months of intensive construction

work days

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and winter coming, my boss has announced to us that the company will take a break during the whole month of

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. As I know

this

long free time is a unique opportunity, I've decided to travel

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random destinations around Brazil. The journey will begin in Fortaleza, which I'll stay for two nights in an astonishing hostel.

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, I'm planning to ride a cheap car to start driving all over the Northeast coast of the country. The stops will include Natal, Recife, and the priceless city Maceio. The entire journey must

last

for fifteen days, finishing in Salvador, where I'll take a direct flight to Vancouver. Because you've once told

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me a huge fan of soccer as well as the mind weather of the place, I thought that would be a great idea

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you to go with me.

Besides

, you are

such

a lovely person to be around; our

last

experience

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together was memorable, and I'd love

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it again. I hope you can manage to come. Best wishes, Cibele

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