In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after retirement. Discuss why this is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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The above shown diagrams describe about A wave energy

machine

. A wave energy

machine

Consist of two chambers and two turbines, one chamber consist of to increase water levels and

second

Consist of air to flow outside of the wave energy

machine

. To electricity generator the turbines should do work hard and it spins around. When the water level increases the air flow will go through the chamber, it goes outside of the

machine

. There should be air flow outside of the

machine

waterways is high,

then

electricity bill generator works.

First

have to check the location of Energy

machine

should placed in the correct order than only it works in the proper manner. When the large waves high output of high installation cost, when small waves low output low installation costs.

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In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after retirement. Discuss why this is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Home schooling belongs to the past and it is completely unacceptable in the modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this situation

There seems to be an increase number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. (Do you agree or disagree?)

More money should be spend on hiring and training the police force in order to reduce crime in big cities. What is your opinion?