The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare the percentage of three different

electricity

sources produced in four major countries from 2003 to 2008. On the whole, it is evident that

while

Vietnam and

India

produced considerably higher

electricity

from fossil fuel,

Sweden

and Morocco appeared to harness

hydro

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hydropower

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power

as their main

electricity

source. Only

India

and

Sweden

had

electricity

produced from nuclear energy. Among

four

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the four

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mentioned nations,

India

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India's

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electricity

depended mostly on fossil fuel, which accounted for over

four fifths

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four-fifths

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. Meanwhile,

Sweden

and Morocco used only 4

percent

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per cent

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and 5

percent

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per cent

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this

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of this

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source, respectively, for

electricity

production. Nuclear

power

however

, was exploited only in

India

and

Sweden

, which

consituted

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constituted

percent

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per cent

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and 44

percent

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per cent

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, respectively.

Hydro

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Hydropower

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power

was used mainly in Morocco, which made up 95

percent

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per cent

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, followed by

Sweden

, where over

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apply

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half

electricity

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of electricity

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production was responsible

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for

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hydro

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hydropower

show examples

power

while

India

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India's

show examples

electricity

production depended 14

percent

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per cent

show examples

this

source, which was the smallest figure compared to other nations.

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