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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express dissatisfaction over the tv which I bought a week ago.
Also I
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Also, I
have tried to get support from your customer service yet still no proper response. I bought a brand new SONY Bravia UK TV on your showroom on
last
monday
the second day of the week; the first working day
Monday
. I analysed many branded showrooms and went
with
Suggestion
to
your shop because of excellent rating. Once the TV got delivered, I eagerly configured all the settings and switched on. To my surprise, the screen was blank and was not showing any picture or videos. I cross checked my power cables, installation and mounting but still the screen was blank. I tried to get help from your support Center. Unfortunately, they were not showing any kind of interest to
the the
definite article
the
issue. I got
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
stuck with no idea of
solution
Suggestion
a solution
. I Strongly recommend you to provide either refund or replacing the TV. I
dont't
do not
don't
want you do fix the issue by changing spares
instead
of replacing. If your company policy
do not permit
Suggestion
does not permit
it, kindly refund the amount Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Biod Peter

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