Fast food has become so popular worlwide that it is destroying the nutritional quality of food.what do you think because of this the traditional food and cooking method is being forgotten. Do you agree or disagree with the statement give reasons for you answer.

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Fast food has become so popular worlwide that it is destroying the nutritional quality of food.what do you think because of this the traditional food and cooking method is being forgotten. Do you agree or disagree with the statement give reasons for you answer.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we are care about them .Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them discuss both views and give your own opinion.

During holidays or weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in the nature environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?

More and more people are stressed today than ever before. What are the causes and solutions?

Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries. Others however, believe it is unnecessary because TV and the Internet can give all the same information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?