Living in a country where people have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems

Living in a country where people have to speak a foreign
language
can cause serious social problems. In my opinion, I disagree with that because when people stay in a place that they cannot use their mother
language
, it is an
oppotunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
to learn something new and make a new
friend
so I opine these cannot make a serious social problem. People have an adaptation ability. When people stay in
foreign country
Suggestion
a foreign country
foreign countries
the foreign country
or
suround
extend on all sides of simultaneously; encircle
surround
with foreign
language
, people can learn for alive. People will learn to listen and try to speak.
Furthermore
, body
language
can
halp
give help or assistance; be of service
help
people to understand another.
For example
, when I was a teenager, I travel to Singapore which some people use Chiness
language
. I do not know the word they
talk but
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talk, but
I understand what are they want to tell me because of their body
langauge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
. If people stay in another country, it is possible to make a new
friend
. Even if, a living in somewhere that
suround
Suggestion
surrounds
surround
surrounded
with the
language
that we do not understand is a difficult situation
,
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,
but in
this
situation it
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situation, it
is easy to make a new
friend
by
jusy
and nothing more
just
a ask for help. My
friend
went to Japan a few years ago. She said
it
it is
it's
hard to live in the early but she found a lot of new friends there, and they can help each other,
for example
. In conclusion, a living in
foreign
Suggestion
a foreign language environment
language
environment is not a cause of serious social problem, as well as
pratical
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
problem because people can learn and make a new
friend
in
this
situation.

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