The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many people are suffering from different types of cancer due to the consumption of smoke. These dangerous effects are well-known to the society by the advertisements and other social networks, but many people are not leaving
this
habit, because of serious addiction towards them.
However
, there are several reasons for
this
situation and
this
can be controlled by implementing certain rules and regulations to the people.
Firstly
, students are the major part of
this
activity, because they are attracted to
this
by seeing their neighbours and some of their classmates are
also
responsible to attract them. Every person who smokes feel that they attain comfort from the cigarettes, but they don't know how it affects their organs and how it leads to severe health problems.
Secondly
, parents who have
this
habit in their routine life are
also
responsible for their children's lifestyle, who learn those unnecessary things from their fathers.
For instance
, one of my friends addicted to cigarette smoking by seeing his father. There are numerous solutions to tackle
this
condition.
First
of all, people tend to aware of
this
, which leads to lung cancer and other health issues. The government
also
takes measures to reduce
this
habit by strictly prohibiting cigarette smoking in public places.
Although
the law enforcement agency implement rules, but some people violating these rules, in that case, the person must be punished and imposing a certain amount of fine to him. These solutions are not readily banned the smoking, but somewhat decreasing in public areas. To conclude, I reiterate my statement by saying that there are many reasons for
this
cause, but it can be reduced only by making an awareness program.

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