People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and ilegal drugs, and at an early age, some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the cause and effects of widespread drug abuse by young people. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

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Teenagers are the future of

country

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the country

and

performes

carry out or perform an action

performs

performed

crucial function

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a crucial function

modern community

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modern communities

a modern community

the modern community

Multitutes

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Multitudes

in all

evolistionised

society yet

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society, yet

nowadays growing

childs

a young person of either sex

children

orchids

are

testing

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tested

with both valid and invalid drugs, and at an

risingly

little age. Few sociologists believe that care taker and

other multitutes

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the other multitudes

other multitudes

of community usually set a bad instance. I will discuss both effects as well as causes along with my opinion.

To begin

with, the notion, the increasing concern of

drug

abuse

is nowadays

very huge issue

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a very huge issue

of the

society

Moreover

, there are ample of reasons which leads to

drug

utilisation by teenagers

such

bad peer group

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a bad peer group

stress

, depression and

drug

addictive

society

. In detail, youngster usually intake invalid medicine or initiate taking invalid medicine due to friends who are in the category of

drug

abuse

In addition

, nowadays teenagers have more

stress

of studies and family

pressure which

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pressure, which

leads to

stress

and anxiety for avoiding

this

they find

substanc

the real physical matter of which a person or thing consists

substance

substances

for relief from

stress

such

drug

coccaine

the act of preparing something (as food) by the application of heat

cooking

chicken

cocoon

However

, apart from

this

society

is the primary factor of

drug

abuse

the reason is

easily

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easy

availablity

the quality of being at hand when needed

availability

of illegal drugs in the community. Moving

further

effects

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the effects

of utilisation of drugs by younger

multitutes

a large indefinite number

multitudes

. In

this

present scenario

drug

addiction in teenager is very common because of easy available drugs which directly

effect

have an effect upon

affect

the health of any individual and

also

some time leads to death.

Moreover

must

used to form the superlative

most

of the growing birds are dying early due to

drug

intake. The major effect

Drug

utilisation is increasing death rate as well as effect on

society

and other

families

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families'

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

For instance

, recently the eminent news channel time of India

reveals

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has revealed

that depth rate Punjab raised by 10% especially youngster are involved only the reason is

drug

abuse

of illegal products all and all it

effects

have an effect upon

affects

the whole economy of the province and major concerns for

rigimes

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

regimes

regions

as well. In my opinion, government should amend strict laws regarding

drug

to control as well as making strict watch by the officials of police on

drug

addiction to avoid harsh conditions in

society

Moreover

, medication for

drug

adiicties

someone who is so ardently devoted to something that it resembles an addiction

addicts

to stop using drugs and make

society

clean and healthy. In summary, I want to restate that intake of valid drugs is

also

harmful when it is taken in overdose and illegal drugs are more harmful there are several causes and effects explained which affects

society

. So, regimes should take responsibility to avoid marketing of illegal drugs.

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