Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is common these days to see some individuals working for themselves rather than being under the control of another person.

This

essay will explain the reason and

also

look at the drawbacks of

this

Firstly

, young people like to be independent.

Although

in all spheres of work, there are still element and room for

mentoring but

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mentoring, but

what school leavers suffer from their bosses are untold. A lot of abuses, shouting and even insults are some of the examples of maltreatment that people suffer today while working with an organization. As a result of these, setting up a personal business is an alternative to

this

Furthermore

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there are lots of small scale loans that banks give people to start their businesses right away from college. For instance, the governor of Oyo State in Nigeria gave out a million

naira

(comparative of 'near' or 'close') within a shorter distance

nearer

to each University graduate to start their own business and

this

has raised up young millionaires. The resultant effect of

this

is that they will continue to work on their own rather than government body. It is worthy of note that working for self rather than

government

Suggestion

the government

or organizations has its own drawbacks. On the

first

note, there will not be room for development. If you are employed in a large firm or an industry, there will be an opportunity to interact or learn what you do not know and become master of it, but if you are alone, you will only operate based on your personal knowledge alone. The effect of

this

will be low

output which

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output, which

will cause less patronage by consumers. In conclusion, while seeking for true pleasure to be the boss of your own, you will do yourself a lot of good if you can

also

learn a craft under someone for some time before you stand on your own.

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