Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antartic. what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Over the

last

few years

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there

has been increasing

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was increased

in the number of people travelling to hostile places.

Tourist

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A tourist

The tourist

could get enjoying adventurous trip and there may be some disadvantages to

this

trend and

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will discuss both in

this

essay. To

begim

take the first step or steps in carrying out an action

begin

with there are many advantages to

visitig

the activity of making visits

visiting

the remote areas.

Firstly

tourisim

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

strengthens the economic conditions of

such

places.

with

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With

more and more

tourist

visit in a country the better the economy grows multiple.

For example

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many roads and hotels

were build

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were built

built

in remote areas these facilities used by locals and as well as it is

also

helpful for travellers and

hence

it helps in enhancing the economy.

Secondly

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if one wants to enjoy the beauty of nature closely

then

he needs to needs to go through some troublesome ways. Like

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to see animals

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Amazon jungle one has to stay in woody areas for

couple

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a couple

of days without using of modern facilities.

On the other hand

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travelling to

such

places like Sahara desert and

antartic

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Antartic

has its disadvantages too.

Firstly

, local peoples find it

difficult to to share

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difficult to share

the natural resources with the

tourist

that already very in low

content

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content, for

for instance

, water is already in very low quantity in the desert areas and with more

tourist

visit

such

places it become really hard for locals. And visiting Antartica, its life challenging to travel to

such

places because its very coldest continent. To sum up, if many

tourist

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tourists

travel in difficult areas, travellers will

also

effect as well as the locals

also

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Also

find difficulties to share their natural resources. In my opinion, the positive aspects of visiting dangerous places like

Sahara

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the Sahara

and Antarctica outweigh the negative aspects.

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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antartic. what are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

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