Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

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Gender inequality is one of the major concerns in most developing countries.

However

, in today's world men and women are getting equal opportunities in terms of jobs, education and in all other fields. But large sections of

society

still believes that some jobs are more suitable for men as compared to women. I am of the opinion that

this

is the matter to debate in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be drawn. In

this

essay, we will discuss both sides of the coin.

To begin

with, as per the latest data of the Forbes 2019, most companies in Japan prefer women over men, as they found women much more productive than others. Many top most organisations have women as their CEO's

such

as Indra Noyi, CEO of Pepsico and many others upcoming entrepreneurs. Female entrepreneurship has increased from 26% to 36%, according to the USA business magazine.To improve the female contribution in

society

Accept space

parents should give equal importance to both boys and girls.. Parents as well as teachers who encourage both boys and girls equally are contributing a lot to

this

society

. We have some famous faces who made our country proud in setting high standards for everyone,

for example

, Ekta Kapoor in entertainment, PV Sandhu in badminton, Kalpana Chawla in space science and many others. So, it is wrong to say that some professions are not meant for women. But it is not a trend without drawbacks which will be discussed in

this

paragraph.

Firstly

, women in our country is always underestimated. It is widely held belief that due to other family responsibilities, women have always lacked productivity, as their families stay on top of their priority list. They are time and travel bound which

also

results in less opportunities and experiences.

Secondly

, many organisations believe that women who are extremely talented got married now and

then

and it gets difficult to find their replacements. So, they prefer men more.

Also

, man can work anywhere and at flexible working hours

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whereas, there are a lot of restrictions for women.

For example

, women have to take care of their families along with their work schedules.

This

results in poor quality and unproductive work from their ends.It is wrongly said that it is a duty of women to take care of family as men are equally responsible for their family needs and demands. One point worth mentioning here is that in some professions women give more preference than male counterparts,

for example

, teaching

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nursing, chef or baker etc. These sections are so women dominated that men in these jobs are not easily accepted by the

society

. It needs to be understood that men and women have different strength and weaknesses and they should not be judged by old societal norms. To sum up, I am of the opinion that it is wrong to give judgements on the basis of gender. Women have more strength and courage than any of the counterparts. They should be given equal opportunities as they are capable to achieve anything until and unless

this

societal norms are not forced on them. Men are equally responsible for their families and children, so they should always give a helping hand to their partners. Together we can achieve anything, alone we can achieve nothing.It is rightly said,"Men can earn butter and bread, women can earn jam for the family".

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Better driver education for better driving habits is more effective than heavier punishments for driving offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?