Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is important to consider the various ways in which various ethnic groups live with one another. Some people believe that a

person’s

tradition and attribute can be

decipher

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deciphered

form their preference of clothes.

This

essay agrees

that is

likely to know much about a

person’s

way of life and attitude from their choice of dressing.

To begin

with, style of clothing is specific to different cultures in Africa especially in Nigeria. The various ethnic groups have their cultural style as well as their behaviours.

For example

, The Nation recently reported that it would be easier to recognize the tribe of a person the way they dress while they were in an occasion compared to when they are not dressed in their native attire.

Nonetheless

, if they cannot be identified based

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their clothing patterns,

then

much information about a

person’s

tradition cannot be discerned through their choices of clothes.

Additionally

, people from another culture rarely put on the attires of the

place

they are currently residing. They probably want to preserve their own tradition by maintaining their own form of dressing.

For instance

, a recent poll by

Delta State Ministry

Suggestion

the Delta State Ministry

of Arts and Cultures found that 95% of settlers are likely to maintain their traditions rather than adopting the once of their current

place

of residence. Notwithstanding, if they had adopted the once of their current

place

of living, much cannot be said about their values. In conclusion, due to people regularly maintaining their own traditional clothing styles and not having interest in adopting the once in their

place

of residence, I believe that it is possible to speak a lot about a

person’s

culture and attitude.

Submitted by ojefobo on Fri Aug 30 2019

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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