Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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resumed. Regards, CT

Fri Aug 30 2019

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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials. What are the reasons and some potential solutions?

Some people think that they should be able to keep the money they earn and do not have to pay tax. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?

In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extend do you think is a positive trand?

Throughout history, male leaders have lead us into violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?